All Comments on 'Praying for Rain'

Actually well written and easy to follow. Kept my interest much better than a lot of stories in this genre

You need more chapters to let us know about Kelly and Darren.

I hope you have a sequel ready, or at least are working on one. This was a great story.

Please tell us more of these twos story, love the way they interact and the possible future that is in store for them....

Like the other commentors I definitely want to see more. You hinted about future feelings so hopefully it was more than just a tease comment. Thank you for a great story

What a great story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I am certainly looking forward to the next chapters. May be Kelly goes to a Uni near to where he lives so they can continue.

A very well written story, enjoyed how you took it along and patiently brought it to a conclusion. This has been one of the best I have read in quite a while. Would hope you follow with this for more exciting reading

One of the best stories I have read on Literotica. Your work should continue, and this story either needs more chapters, or some kind of conclusion.....

I think if you were to check yourself you could find some chapters to continue a well written and thought out story. Please continue.

I agree with every one. You need another chapter. Well writt.

What rules ? We know so little, Kelly I think is going to find out for us. I've never reached your depths in my eforts to pleasure her, and I don't cook very well. Not her ex.

So well done, I hope you'll write another chapter! Thank you!

Simply the best that I have read on this site.

Thank you for a fantastic read. Hope you plan to do more with this story.

Good character development and depiction of the mental game and rising erotic tension and arousal between two people getting to know each other and enjoying each other's company. A treat to read and effectively creating readers' arousal also. Thanks a lot for your submission!

Don't wait so long to continue the story. I like your writing. You make them feel like real people.

Excellent story, very hot. Sure hope you don't take 2 years before the next chapter.

She needs to go to college in Arizona.

You had me with you right up to the club size cock. Every story that includes exaggerated sizes turns me off. You had me until then. After that I just waited for the ending, glad that there was no page 4.

Like the previous commenter, i was enjoying the read ( except for the misuse of "smirk") until he flops the 9" cock out.

Must we?

Shouldn't each have some concern? Either he should say he's had a Vasectomy or wears a condom, or he should ssk if she is on the pill.

I also agree with others that the 9 inch cock is silly. It is a distraction and it is not necessary to the success of the story.

The story itself is well told up to this point and is intriguing.

Ok, washboard abs, big cock, rich, Astin Martin. I'm sure there's a 4th degree black belt and Masters degree in awesomeness as well. Why can't people write a realistic story without that crap? 99.999% of the people in the world have NONE of those things and yet, people couple and romance flourishes. Hmmmm. Reality is if a girl that small a 6.5" pecker would be quite fulfilling. For some petite women a 9" cock would be fisting. Astin Martin?? Really?? WTF...

Another story with a COMPLETELY unrealistic protagonist. Really lousy and lazy writing. Anybody who gives this anymore than 2 starts is an ignorant sap.

Some readers were offended by the 9inch cock, men cum in all sizes. Two inches smaller than me they'd hate me, but its fun to pound a girl senseless. Women love it and if they deny it they are lying. The story was a bit too much to swallow (no pun) have to give it a three star vote because he wasn't hungry enough to slam her open.

giving 5 stars just because i want to piss off the person that said it shouldnt get more than two. What im noticing is the people that read from literotica are way to cridical, lighten up. its free. comment but dont be rude. by the way i loved it. took me away from my fucked up life