All Comments on 'Preparing for My Lover'

You really pulled me in as a reader, with a mix of detail on the physical and mental preparations as she enjoyed them, quite believeable. Loved it.

Excellent flow to your words, they bring all the senses into play.

I found your name in the volunteer editor listing. I am not a literotica member ... I have written several novels (5) and while nothing like your style of writing, I would like your opinion about mine. Would you be interested? I can send a couple of chapters from one. I write in MS Word. They are all action/adventure/romance with an erotic core to some of the plot lines.

Regards,

Rob rcarver1@cfl.rr.com

Very descriptive. This could easily have been catagorized a "How To." I made some mental notes.