Primal Evolution Pt. 04

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I slowly entered her again. I could hear her groan and squeal as I purposefully pressed a little harder on her g-spot. I lifted off of her slightly, I wanted to feel myself enter her and play with her clit. There was something about me stretching her... not enough to tear her, but enough to fill every part of her, that made me go insane. She started to panic as I did so and I realized she didn't want me to leave her. She wanted me near her body.

I could tell Sabine had been hurt several times. I haven't really pushed her to tell me more, or dug around in her mind either. Maybe this is why she was such a fighter. She had to be, she'd became accustomed to it.

I hated that I wasn't always there to protect her. More so that I was still a source of stress and distrust. Her wolf trusted me though. She made it so much harder that she refused to see that there was another part of her. I know this would be easier for the both of us if she would.

I laid back on top of her. I couldn't deny her comfort and if made me happy that it was something I could finally provide. I released her neck and kissed her softly. Up to her jaw line, her cheek and her lips. She relaxed and I laid still inside her. My wolf did not approve. His agitation rose. Impregnating her was a mission to him. He wouldn't be satisfied till she was. But I wanted to savor this her need of me. I knew it would leave almost as quickly as it came.

I started massaging her lower belly. This action was more than just to sooth her. It encouraged ovulation. It was a motion that made her body aware that it was time to accept what I am giving it and make a life out of it.

I laughed slightly as I bit her right above her right breast. If she would have known the purpose of it before I guarantee she would have lost her mind. This woman may very well be the death of me.

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avengilineavengilineover 4 years ago
DON'T YOU DARE

IT'S NOT FUNNY! IF HE DIES I WILL TOTALLY CHANGE THE RATING

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Honestly....

The only thing I ask, is that you read my comment in its entirety.

I’m a stickler for correct grammar, correct word usage, etc. because it keeps the flow of the story smooth and I damn near worship the written word! With that being said, here’s my two cents on your submission.

You need an editor like ten years ago, your grammar sucks a**, you can’t spell for sh** and you consistently use the wrong words throughout the entirety of this story BUT, even with all of the aforementioned I never once skipped ahead in the story and I have thoroughly read each chapter from start to finish. Why? You are one hell of a story teller! You give a fresh take on the werewolf/alpha/mate tale, you have a vast imagination and your ability to pull your readers in, feel/see/totally experience what the characters do is sh** some published authors haven’t been able to accomplish! Never give up writing because you are a true weaver of tales, move your ass & publish your work (at least as an e-book) and take all of our damn money when you do so! I’m serious, your work is top shelf!

LikeTheLotusLikeTheLotusover 6 years agoAuthor
SOWWWWY

I've just submitted #5! Should be up soon! Thank you all so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More?

Soon? Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I hope you are still writing! Love the story!

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