All Comments on 'Prison Consequences'

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LolaOHaraLolaOHaraover 15 years ago
hot!

I have a bit of a prison fantasy so I enjoyed this quite a bit. The use of the word "you" was good because it made me feel like I was in the story. I liked how to detailed the girl's reactions as well as your own. Excellent work.

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