All Comments on 'Prize Bull Ch. 02'

by carlieplum

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animaluver40animaluver40over 10 years ago
yummy and great story

Awesome story please keep going. Can't eait for chpt 3. Maybe add some anal toys and also add stuff (example) make a dungeon in the basement and have travis keep a butt plug in his ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
No

This wonderful story doesn't need dungeons and cartoon domme nonsense. She is doing just fine with him as she is. Keep it and him cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Delicious!!!

I adore this submissive cowboy, dear. But I really cherish seeing him become totally submissive where his thoughts are only about her satisfaction or pleasure. And he positively has to be decadently displayed for Dara and her friends. Is not the true enjoyment of a gift in its sharing? Show off that cowboy, to the benefit of some lucky ladies.

slimeyslimeyover 10 years ago
I'm with "no"

you clearly know what you're doing with this story. Keep it up.

carlieplumcarlieplumover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the nice feedback everyone.

I do have a plan for where the story is going and hope you will like it even if it's not exactly what you have pictured. Chapter three is in the queue for Laurel's approval and should be available in the next few days.

--CarliePlum

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
She's a slut, coercing a young man

What's interesting or fun about that? Nothing original here. No clever dialogue and why does he not just leave and never go back? She's a bitch, abusing him plain and simple.

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Why does he not leave?

'Cause he LIIIIIIIIIKES it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I love the build up

he is loving it too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
No - he hates it.

He's just too dumb to notice. Hate stories in which the characters don't react like people but behave like rocks.

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