All Comments on 'Professor in Love: A Story'

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Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Mentioned

You've been mentioned in the Author's Hangout New Story Reviews.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
very good

Great story. Hope to see more from you someday soon.

- AchtungNight.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
hot but needs editing

this is an excellent, sexy story-

the only problem is that the grammar mistakes are so distracting!

sorobornsorobornalmost 11 years ago
Grammar

Actually I think it adds something - a bit ee Cummings, a bit Emily Dickinson or James Joyce. Don't worry about it, keep writing :-)

BrookeTabbyBrookeTabbyabout 2 years ago

Good story but was marred by lack of editing.

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