All Comments on 'Professor in Love: A Story'

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BrookeTabbyBrookeTabbyabout 2 years ago

Good story but was marred by lack of editing.

sorobornsorobornalmost 11 years ago
Grammar

Actually I think it adds something - a bit ee Cummings, a bit Emily Dickinson or James Joyce. Don't worry about it, keep writing :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
hot but needs editing

this is an excellent, sexy story-

the only problem is that the grammar mistakes are so distracting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
very good

Great story. Hope to see more from you someday soon.

- AchtungNight.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Mentioned

You've been mentioned in the Author's Hangout New Story Reviews.

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