All Comments on 'Promises Pt. 04'

Is It the Wicked Witch at the Door?

I thought she gave up way too easily. I mean Greek God body, money, and good at oral is not a combination that comes along that often. Maybe she found finding a new replacement for Peter not as simple as she had imagined.

Just a quick FYI. I love your writing, and have been sitting on my hands with ‘Promises’ waiting for the full posting. I look forward to that. Thanks

Stupid me! I found your Amazon page months ago and already downloaded all your offerings including ‘Promises’! Unfortunately ‘Promises’ went to my lengthy TBR list where it’s been languishing since March! I guess I have a mental disconnect between the Literotica quick reads and the full length novels. Anyway readers, check out Michael Butterfield’s Amazon page! ‘Life Raft’ is still my favorite! Thanks Mr. B.

What's with the scary (?) enticements ?. They don't add to the story. LP

Kudos on the pacing. Long, beautiful exposition and development, followed now with a wecome release. As always, 5 stars!