All Comments on 'Promising Danielle Ch. 04'

by LocusOnus

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catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
AGAIN GREAT

well written and nice flow, i cannot wait for the next chapter( and please give us more of the land ladies, they sound like fun)

morefunnmorefunnalmost 14 years ago
Great Flow

I am really enjoying how this story seems to flow and the two beginning their exploration of each other and hopefully some healing.

Already for the next installment.

Thanks for an enjoyable story.

kiwiplumkiwiplumalmost 14 years ago
good one

I like your slightly humourous style, makes it fun and sexy...

CarlySandsCarlySandsabout 4 years ago
Hey

A neat couple. I'd try to investigate ways of not beginning chapters with your narrator waking up in the morning. There are thousands of sex story chapters that begin like that.

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