by Unykorn
again I like the story but still he was mean and sounded like they still haven't talked about anything and even waited longer then said for her release if he keeps pushing sounded like she might even leave I really hope you do a part three or even more chapters I don't want you to think im complaining its just frustrating with stories like this where she was worried about something then just lay down and takes it
Thank you for sticking with my story line. I hope questions will be answered because there is more to come.
I'm still sad for her and angry at him. I'm staying with it to see where you take it, but I'm heart hurt. She didn't do want she did out of attitude but concern. He's over reacted. There was no discussion. He's gone beyond the stated punishment. He's pushed her to a point of damage to the relationship and her faith in him. If he continues on this road, I really really hope she safewords.
Waiting anxiously now.
(Ps. I do like your writing. You've pulled me in enough to care and become upset.)