All Comments on 'Punish Me'

I loved it. I'd not used a lube tho.

Stargazer55

The last comment about no lube... totally wrong & a HUGE turn off.

Also, please proof read before submission. I know we're not here for the Grammer but when he shits in the car (instead of sits) it takes readers out of the story.

Other than that...great story!

I really liked it, however like the comment before said it does need a quick proofread.

I only saw two mistakes though.

Anyways, good work. I hope you write more.

And I wouldn’t mind if you continued this story.

Also to the comment below mine: it was actually supposed to be “shifts” not “sits”.

I did like it but it seems to me like a story that should be continued.

If you continue it I’d definitely read it.