by HarleyWank
I did like it but it seems to me like a story that should be continued.
If you continue it I’d definitely read it.
I really liked it, however like the comment before said it does need a quick proofread.
I only saw two mistakes though.
Anyways, good work. I hope you write more.
And I wouldn’t mind if you continued this story.
Also to the comment below mine: it was actually supposed to be “shifts” not “sits”.
The last comment about no lube... totally wrong & a HUGE turn off.
Also, please proof read before submission. I know we're not here for the Grammer but when he shits in the car (instead of sits) it takes readers out of the story.
Other than that...great story!