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All Comments on 'Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Badly written garbage

The scores should tell you how bad this is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Meh

The story a little bit more build up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
You should continue...

Definitely need to continue this as the storyline has a lot of potential. Grammar could use a bit of work, but definitely not the worst. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That ending

Fine until the very end...

RegretsRegretsover 5 years ago
Raising standards

It got really hot at the end. She will have a cleaner house from now on. He may need to be reminded now and again

scatfacesittingscatfacesittingover 1 year ago

trochu víc bych to rozepsal. hlavně ten konec. bylo to moc rychle ukončeno. Ale jako pro představu minipříběh dobrý.

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