by marriedpervs
I always love reading your stories - some of the description turns it into a game of "have I been there?" but it's always great to read a fellow Melbournite's writing. I may have to go back to the beginning of your stories and start reading all over again!
Very nice!!
I am growing to really love your writing - it is fun you have fun -
The autobiographical stuff seems real enough and you two seem to enjoy - the fantasy is good reads.
Thank you -
A little more proofreading for things like
That woman we me, and I didn't care what it looked like
you probably meant was not we?
maximize the eroticness for us both.
Eroticism?
Minor but hopefully helpful
You MUST tell me if you post your porn movie online, and where I can find it. You have a very sexy body Dee.
Fantastic! The description of Tracey licking her asshole was amazing. That made the story perfect. You get a 5 and keep up the great work.
My wife and I were swingers for many years. You have captured the excitement and frantic arousal of a hot session.
Because Steve isn't stupid and he doesn't have a death wish. So divorcing a bi-sexual slut would be high on his list of things to do before she brings home some nasty disease he can't divorce. Dumb story.
A story like this gets you off, then you have a serious hair trigger problem.