All Comments on 'Push Me, Pull You!'

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melbclaymanmelbclaymanover 13 years ago
Excellent

I always love reading your stories - some of the description turns it into a game of "have I been there?" but it's always great to read a fellow Melbournite's writing. I may have to go back to the beginning of your stories and start reading all over again!

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 13 years ago
HOT !!

Very nice!!

I am growing to really love your writing - it is fun you have fun -

The autobiographical stuff seems real enough and you two seem to enjoy - the fantasy is good reads.

Thank you -

A little more proofreading for things like

That woman we me, and I didn't care what it looked like

you probably meant was not we?

maximize the eroticness for us both.

Eroticism?

Minor but hopefully helpful

UpStandingMemberUpStandingMemberalmost 13 years ago
Very hot!

You MUST tell me if you post your porn movie online, and where I can find it. You have a very sexy body Dee.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome gooey load pumped from my cock.

Fantastic! The description of Tracey licking her asshole was amazing. That made the story perfect. You get a 5 and keep up the great work.

Ken65BKen65Balmost 10 years ago
great capture

My wife and I were swingers for many years. You have captured the excitement and frantic arousal of a hot session.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I'm thinking she was about to be divorced

Because Steve isn't stupid and he doesn't have a death wish. So divorcing a bi-sexual slut would be high on his list of things to do before she brings home some nasty disease he can't divorce. Dumb story.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
If

A story like this gets you off, then you have a serious hair trigger problem.

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