All Comments on 'Queen of Paradise'

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donnieohdonnieohover 7 years ago
Great beginning

What a great start to the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
OMG so hot!

Can't wait to see him swallow Stephanie's big load!

Wild1977auWild1977auover 7 years ago
That was hot!!

That was real hot, wish it was me, can't wait for the next chapter. Great story so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
OMG HOT!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!. Soooooooo HOT!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow!

This is great! i really love the unexpected turns. Although, as one gets into the story, it becomes clearer that Maria has had all this set up in advance :)

Really loved the early part, with her having hubby rate dicks and get those pink bikini bottoms on. When she bought him the pink squirrel drink, I laughed...loved those little humiliations while with her new beau! ~sara

ptpl_guyptpl_guyover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you all for your kind comments!

Thank all of you for your kind comments. This is my first submission. Chapter two will be available shortly after the new year.

ptpl_guyy

samislutsamislutabout 7 years ago
so hot

i'm loving this story and am trying not to cum in my sticky panties!!!! keep it up (so to speak)

samislut

LisaBrooksLisaBrooksover 5 years ago
Interested!

Nice story! A man became a woman with the help of Miss Stephanie! Where do you get that machine? I want one to practice on!

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