All Comments on 'Quick and Dirty Fix'

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sparktjsparktjover 4 years ago

Loved it. Made me very horny. Your writing is excellent, a relief from so much that is mediocre on here. Thank you, please write more. I especially enjoy erotica centred on highly sexed older women.

jay_pearcejay_pearceover 4 years ago
Great read!

Loved the pace and build of the story! Since you asked the only thing I saw was that the vodka in the glass mysteriously became tequila in the glass 😉.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very well done, A++ effort on all fronts!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent execution.

Having read most of your stories, so far, (I go chronologically) the setups are always intriguing. The actual sex tends to be very similar, almost templated. I find I'm now glossing over much of the sex. It still works, however.

One continuity error - vodka does not magically become tequila when added to OJ. (grin).

Thanks for your efforts.

BluJ

jsch1947jsch1947over 1 year ago

Your character development is magnificent.

Short, sweet, as vivid as your sex.

They SHINE!!!

This could take a second chapter!!!

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I reject your reality, and substitute my own. My stories are not meant for those who seek complete reality, which I assume my pen name should give away. In my little world, there are no STDs, unless necessary to the story. The weird exception is the rule when you step into ...