by RejectReality
Your character development is magnificent.
Short, sweet, as vivid as your sex.
They SHINE!!!
This could take a second chapter!!!
Having read most of your stories, so far, (I go chronologically) the setups are always intriguing. The actual sex tends to be very similar, almost templated. I find I'm now glossing over much of the sex. It still works, however.
One continuity error - vodka does not magically become tequila when added to OJ. (grin).
Thanks for your efforts.
BluJ
Loved the pace and build of the story! Since you asked the only thing I saw was that the vodka in the glass mysteriously became tequila in the glass 😉.
Loved it. Made me very horny. Your writing is excellent, a relief from so much that is mediocre on here. Thank you, please write more. I especially enjoy erotica centred on highly sexed older women.