All Comments on 'Quickie'

This was one of the worst stories I've read on Lit.

Face sitting huh. A fine upsitting fetish. The story doesn't really work - the whole secret government agent didn't work and was superfluous. Better to have her a psychotic gun toting sex offender to give the BDSM sex angle.

The set up aside, I didn't find this erotic - any scenario featuring a smelly tramp isn't going to be much of a turn on for most readers, even if they are into face sitting. This isn't the worst written story on this site, it's just not that good.

a good story and good writing style.