All Comments on 'Rainy Day Erotic Noir'

The one-man office... the voluptuous broad in high heels... the double entendres... even the corny metaphors. A spectacular piece of writing that tickles more than my funny bone. Kudos!

Very well written and funny enough to keep me smiling, when I wasn't laughing.

Nice shift at the end. Rest checks all the boxes. As the Queen might have said at one point or another, “We are…amused.”

lololol,,,well done,,thanks!