All Comments on 'Rainy Day Erotic Noir'

by SPEN STERLING

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olblueyesolblueyes12 months ago

lololol,,,well done,,thanks!

Polly_DollyPolly_Dollyabout 1 year ago

Nice shift at the end. Rest checks all the boxes. As the Queen might have said at one point or another, “We are…amused.”

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fun Read

Very well written and funny enough to keep me smiling, when I wasn't laughing.

amyssamyssover 14 years ago
It's got it all...

The one-man office... the voluptuous broad in high heels... the double entendres... even the corny metaphors. A spectacular piece of writing that tickles more than my funny bone. Kudos!

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