All Comments on 'Rainy Day Girl Ch. 04'

I love the Rainy Day Girl saga! They're so hot...keep'em cumming Mr. Chuckles :)

Hey,

Good stories but they are all a bit short. Like my own I may add!

You could learn a lot from GeorgeTasker.

I know mine are very short, and I doubt I'll be updating, but if you wait for my newer stories (17-20 - They're in the editing process) you'll find they are a lot better then my previous.

If I may say so, you should be aiming for 3,000-4,000 at least!

We both have so far to go.

Just some constructive critisisms - Hope you don't get offended. I'm only saying so you don't run in to the same mistakes I did. :)

i love this rainy day girl saga. but i am depressed about a few things, i wish it was a little longer with more detail and i kinda want to see them get together. but other than that they are great and leave the reader thirsty for more.

I loved it. its really great. you might want to make it a bit longer. i hope they hook up.

dude u gotta keep these stories going. this is one of the best if not the best story on this site. keep them comming!!!

this series is absolutely great, one of the best one i've read

keep up the good work

oh my my my amazing but again bro u left little thing u never had to leave her coz u could see the love in her eyes anyway excellent story n thnx for the great pleasure. my e-mail is a_online001@yahoo.com if wana tal so i will be much happy

So, good story. Quite classic in it's composition. The entire series is great. The video game controller was quite unexpected, I must say. One thing though. Unless this guy went through a drive-thru, he could have never gotten in a restaurant without his shoes, man. I'm a chef, I would know. Anyway, there's my constructive criticism. Other than that, keep it up. Very Good Stuff

I suppose that we cannot stay in HS forever can we? I quite like this series of vignettes. If they were longer they could be called short stories.

Could have done without the Asshat brother, though!

I DID like the fact that he used her ass a bit in this one, however. I was wondering if he was ever going to do anything with her gorgeous bum (that he had men-

tioned repeatedly in the series.)

You HAVE to do another!!!

great chain storys you have to write more id love it if they ended up together though!!!

aaahhhhhmazing

Man you have got to continue this story or I may hunt you down. Lol. It is great

I read everything up to the end of Chapter 4, and I'm hoping to see more of Ian and Rachel. The series also makes me curious about whether the author is as good in bed as he writes. :-p

Great series! Makes me wish I was Rachael. ;) Please continue this series!

This is an amazing series. Please continue.

Ok this has been very good so bring on the next chapter.

Good story! I kinda wish they got married in the end and raised a family.