by TeresaJ
This is written very well giving insight into how the less fortunate live and are treated when on the wrong side of things.
above point....
She was happy with the wife sharing thing but was really nervous about being shared with the BBC where BBC stands for Bullying, Black, and Criminal. Although she sneers at those whites who wouldn't have her because she'd been had by black, look at what happened to her, and look at the way the black pimp wanted to use her, as a racially subservient plaything, and he wanted to bully hubby as well instead of just taking his turn like the others. Yes you can say she was ruined thanks to the attitudes of the white church going folk too.
a brilliant gripping read. YES you can write, and very well and revealingly. Dare I say yet again the BMWF is a car crash....?
You provide a great description of the descent into evil and the madness that exists there. Would luv to know how it all turned out.
Okay so she is not especially pious. When I was in the Army, back in the "draft" days, I knew guys that were more involved with extra raw sex than this struggling part time whore. Night and day, in all kinds of weather all they could talk about was raw sex. And they were the "heroes" of our nation.
We need to understand what goes on in the heads of all our countrymen (and women, especially the women), This ol' bitch was only a female like version of a heroic male adventurer.
I don't think I've read better. Not what I expected. I hope it's fantasy, but it doesn't read that way. I don't know what your aim was, but now I feel guilty and I'm fucked if I know why.
I have never before sat and read a whole set of stories, but it was more affecting than anything i have read before on this site. Yes the sex was filthy in a very good way, and then turned on it's head to leave me feeling really uneasy. For the first time on this site I found the story was more important than the sex. Despite what you say about yourself in the intro to part 7 or 8 this is a really impressive piece of literature. Forget the anonymous haters, they can't write so don't give them a second thought. Thank you
The story shows just what god fearing folks are capable of doing in the name of justice, especially the elected officials we have in this country. This surely seems as if it is a true story. Thanks
But I dont get erotic feelings from reading about women with no brains or emotions. A whore can have feelings and emotions. A crack whore is lucky if she can breathe. End this...........