All Comments on 'Ravaged'

Hot is the only word that comes to mind. Hope there is indeed more to come with the two friends...this was a great story, well writen and as I said before HOT

Why do so many people have "non-consent" stories that end with the person being raped saying "Thank you" and "I'm so glad we pretended to do this." It doesn't make sense. Either point out from the beginning that it's planned by the characters of the story, or don't write it at all.