All Comments on 'Rayne Ch. 09'

Good for Gabriella! I hope she manages to hold herself together until help arrives. :) There are some minor errors -- typos, slight misspellings like "to" instead of "too" -- that could benefit from an editor. Otherwise, good story and I can't wait for more.

actually rape her. Some warning would have been appreciated, even though you didn't go into much detail. She may be strong but I don't know any woman who can push that kind of violation aside indefinitely. She's going to have to break eventually. I was very surprised that she was/seemed indifferent to the rape.

Please don't leave us hanging like this! This is by far my favorite series!!