All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 05'

You do need to edit it a bit as you swapped names between Ray and Harry a few times.

Every young man would like to have those abilities, especially the ability to control his woman's orgasm.

Good chapter, hot and erotic. Thanks for the chapter

was this part of a larger book at some point? its in the novels section but its only one page each? i know that seems like a weird thing to pick out but when you expect a novel and only get 1 page, its a little disappointing.