All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 11'

Waiting for the next Chapter.

This is a great storyline and one which allows you to incorporate as many aspects of the literotica site as you wish - by the way - very well written - just keep em coming!

The story is getting more involved with the super-natural, and the plot thickens with danger and fear for the group of lovers.

A very original story and plot, and it is much more than just an erotic story, especially since the characers have become so real in my mind.

Thanks for the chapter.

It just keeps getting better and better