by Geminine
Need to recheck your explanations of how she looked, you said she had long legs then she was short, she had blonde hair then dark, very confusing.
***
Why the hell are asterisks necessary? Did you write this story on your phone?
***
I think there are two different women involved with Dick but I missed the introduction. I want to see the video!
Why was the film being made? For what audience? Did Dick ever cum? Why will her BF see this film?
This is such a unique way to describe the action. To have the simultaneous reactions keeps it fresh, and actually mirrors a real reaction video. The only part I’m missing out on is the money shot for Maddie ;) 5 stars for this quickie!