All Comments on 'Reading with Tess'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Erotic

I enjoyed this story....I felt as if I was Tess reading this. Feeling your hands as she read the story....receiving pleasure from the story as well as from you. I will definitely be reading this story again. Well done Sir. ---- Sweet Jessica

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
*blushing*

great story. i loved the way the momentum built up x

violetflowervioletflowerabout 16 years ago
Wonderful

Wonderful story, so well written. Wish there were more chapters....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh My

This was amazing.

Very erotic. A wonderful read.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 16 years ago
Not bad, but

choose a tense and stick with it. Changing all the time really brought me out of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good girl this Tess

I was enthralled with Tess being so into the reading of a story. I wish she would come another time in another story.

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