by domtopman
I enjoyed this story....I felt as if I was Tess reading this. Feeling your hands as she read the story....receiving pleasure from the story as well as from you. I will definitely be reading this story again. Well done Sir. ---- Sweet Jessica
Wonderful story, so well written. Wish there were more chapters....
choose a tense and stick with it. Changing all the time really brought me out of the story.
I was enthralled with Tess being so into the reading of a story. I wish she would come another time in another story.