All Comments on 'Rearview Mirror'

by kendra1980

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NattyBumppoNattyBumppoover 13 years ago
Absolutely wonderful

I almost feel as if I've done this before. Marvelous tension, beautifully written.

kendra1980kendra1980over 13 years agoAuthor
I wish

I could go back in and fix those typos. *note to self, self-editing is OUR friend :)

GiggLeGasmGiggLeGasmabout 13 years ago
:)

I love the verbage, "Her body bathed his cock"

charliespeedcharliespeedalmost 13 years ago
Steamy

I love the way you set the stage of anticipation with Simone thinking about her lover. So sexy and vivid. I'm brand new here at Literotica and this is the first post I've read. If this is an example of what's here, I'm looking forward to more erotic escapades that entertain and arouse!

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