by RebaHottie
A pimp and his whore!!! No love in this...No respect or self-respect in this...Just two low life persons...A sad tale...1*
You chose to post this in the Loving Wives category, so the feedback you will receive will inevitably be hateful vitriol, schoolyard-level name-calling, death threats, personal attacks, and people who take this story far too seriously. If you're new to this site, it can be confusing.
Now, about your story, I think it began well, but quickly devolved into a fantasy that is so far over the top it became impossible to relate to. I would have enjoyed this story more if husband and wife had considered her giving a BJ to just one man. There would be a considerable amount of dialog beforehand: will they or won't they? Why do each of them want to do this? Who should they choose as the lucky recipient?
There should be some tension, some insight into each person's feelings as the events unfold, and then some sort of resolution afterward, regardless of what happens. That would be an interesting tale.
Having the wife suck off so many men, for money, really seemed irrational. Also, I didn't understand why she couldn't show her face, or why whipped cream was involved, or why they had to wear condoms. Nothing ruins a good erotic story more than condoms! This is a fantasyland where STD's don't exist. Lose the condoms.
Welcome to Lit, and keep writing.
and if anyone should kill themselves it's you asshole of LIT! I gave this a 5 to help your score and offset the 1 vote this retard gives out to everyone,.
to offset the meaningless score bonny/vasty hands out on every story that doesn't deserve a five - two can play this game asshole
Swingerjoe got to start bashing others first before actually talking about the story. I guess he's got to get it off his chest. Self therapy of some kind, I suppose.
No comment on story, didn't read it. The feedback wasn't very positive. Why waste my time.
Swingerjoe's stories all suck and get terrible scores so he bashes all his lowlife competition. It makes his little weenie swell. Story was unreadable and boring.
Wife becomes a big cock whore? Husband doesn't have to be attending a convention for wife to service a convention. Are they going on the road? So if she continues sucking cocks, will he continue letter her fuck the big cocks? Guess I was looking for more than a sales report and customer satisfaction summary.
What was interesting, sexy or erotic about this mess? Nothing. Not cleverly told. Not fun to read.
1 star.
Really? Where is the erotica? Where is the entertainment? Where is the controversy?
All this was is suck, suck, suck, lick, lick, lick. That's it folks. Too far fetched. Boring and stale reading. Oh, did I mention boring and stale?
In "Frustration" the man asked his wife if she was a $2 Million or $50 whore,
She was 2 mill and I see we found the $50 skank.
How proud he must be to be married to a cheap, cheap, whore
Call me tight-fisted but how much is an anonymous blowjob worth? I think I'd want a fair bit of interaction with the practitioner for $50.
Sounds like buster has himself a whore who loves to suck and more. He's the pinp. What's erotic about a business deal?
dont listen to all the asshole talk shit thet all just mad because they dont have a hot wife like you
and how this fool sucks cock!!!!
Yep, comments from "swingerjoe" and "bonnietaylor2" are predictable. Same shit whining on every story. What a pair, now all that's missing is "frontlinecaster". He'll be along soon looking for that blowjob. Up for it bonny? lol
write his crazy ass comments.. he reads every one of thee LW stories and then bitches about them like the fag he is.
Great story for 5 stars. I can not wait to hear about your wife going into the sex business and about all they guys yet to fuck her just like my wife has done for that past 20 years.
Fifty bucks for a blowjob? Really? No fucking way would I ever spend $50 for a lousy blowjob when most girls will suck for practically nothing. You have a lot of dumb,stupid men in your story if they are willing to spend fifty bucks on a lousy blowjob.
$5,000 no woman or man would ever want your scabby ughly old cock
I guess this cheating whore isn’t Reba McIntyre if she’s selling 50 dollar blowjobs.
People that write crap like this need to be castrated in public and made to eat their own nuts.