All Comments on 'Rebecca's First'

Pretty awesome, I wanted to join in

Pretty good story but you keep mixing from present to past tense and more detail would be good.

Loved it - great fantasy - Rebecca and 9 frat boys round the pool. I want you to write another session. How about some more detail - how does she feel with their cocks jamming her throat and their balls slapping her face? How about some more dialogue - it's great when they describe in great detail what they're going to do to to her and then do it. And with 9 cocks and only 3 holes we know what frat boys do while they're waiting in line - fuck each other - give us some bisexual entertainment as well. Or maybe have Rebecca invite a girlfriend over for a gangfucking.