All Comments on 'Rebirth Ch. 02'

Wow. Great story so far. I'm just sad to read "The End". Here's hoping you plan to continue the story with a new series.

Wish it didn't have to end...

A sequel where Kayley kills her 'mother,' destroys her mother's empire and gets away with it legally and emotionally would be good, but I won't hold my breath!

This story is an extraordinary find, thank you for writing it.

I so appreciate a mind controller who lifts their subject up instead of degrading and destroying something beautiful and pure.

Thank you for a beautiful story. This is one of those times that I wish such technologies really existed so that I could have my own unbearable existence wiped away and become someone happy. Thank you for such a bittersweet dream.

One of my favorite things about your pieces is that they stand on their own as literature, rather than simply porn. You put heart and soul and thought into your characters, you build their histories and their personalities, and when you weave their stories around them, that work truly shines. It's honestly inspiring.

I guess we're all here on this site looking for some kind of stimulation; I didn't expect to find this particular sort tonight, but thank you anyway for the compelling tale and the vivid plot. I smiled at "Mom," and I'm glad Samuels is finding fulfillment for herself, too.

Thank you.

Brilliant, just absolutely brilliant.