All Comments on 'Recovery'

by frostyghost09

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 9 years ago
Nice

Great to read about a loving married couple.

impo_60impo_60about 9 years ago
A good LW story...

A good LW story...Could be LW or Romance, that's what a real LW story should always be...3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
finger down your throat would be great dear annony

then get on your knees and lick it back up!! 5 I gave this a 5

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 9 years ago
Does it meet an LW criterion?

Forget the Category TITLE. Read the Category CRITERIA! In the case of THIS story, is Sweetie an Adventurous Wife? Usually, the 'adventurous' criterion is met because the 'loving' part is ironic (meaning that Sweetie is sexually involved in someone OTHER than Hubby!) A wife screwing her hubby MAY be acting in an adventurous fashion, especially if she is doing something they have not done before, especially-er (sic) if it is something kinky!

Sorry, but that is by DEFINITION of the LIT site management system!.

Does it sound like THIS Sweetie does things Hubby finds delightful? You bet! Does it sound like a special evening? Sure! Does it sound like Sweetie risks exploring new ground that Hubby might find unpleasant? Not to me! I think this story fails to provide a critical criterion of the LW category. Therefore ... NOT Loving Wives!

Don't LIKE the LIT criteria for LW? Fine! Read in other categories ... Romance, First Time, Erotic Coupling, Mature, Interracial, et cetera! Do NOT try to re-define what is not yours (or mine) to re-define. I do NOT happen to like BDSM ... so (with a very few exceptions) I do NOT read there. Most of the writing in IR I find to depend heavily on inaccurate stereotypes and obnoxious attitudes, so I rarely go there unless a contribution is highly recommended!

Would I remove the categories I don't enjoy from LIT? Nope ... to each, his or her own! My sincere thanks to LIT for providing this kinky public service ... in ALL the categories!

Not rated, but enjoyed.

seekerazseekerazabout 9 years ago
@ Lickideesplit It fits in LW

as much as the fetish stuff that ends up in here. "& more" in the description includes just about anything. I wish that there was a Loving Couples hub with stories about couples who actually behave as is they love each other. Erotic Couplings might fit but there are a bunch of LW and cuck stories that have ended up there. Romance? maybe but maybe not. I don't read the BDSM, IR, or non-consent for a variety of reasons some of which I bet I share with you.

This story was pretty hot, too hot for romance, and it was a fun read. If voting I would have given it a five.

gordo12gordo12about 9 years ago
Not to Get Too Harsh

But the LW category isn't about love and romance. It's about cheating swinging and other such fun times. As others have indicated Romance or Erotic would be better for this. Readers in the category would find the story beyond BORING!

There are readers there that would appreciate the story but you set yourself up for unwarranted criticism by posting it here. 1*

frostyghost09frostyghost09about 9 years agoAuthor
Okay guys...

I've been reading all comments, and appreciate the feedback. At the current time, I have just put in a request for this to be relocated to the erotic couplings category.

bruce22bruce22about 9 years ago
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Snap shot. It is a simple erotic coupling story without any tension.

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