All Comments on 'Red vs Wolfe Ch. 04'

HAHAHA I love it! YEA! And I'm the first to comment.. BEAT THAT OTHER READERS! lol

This is a great chapter, and i'm glad that Shasha decided to go to him......

I'm wondering if that 'wild' pack is going to cause trouble and kidnap shasha just to get to him? That or make him go to her like a trap...

You know... bday is in lik 5 days lol... What a wonderful gift it would be...if there were to be another chapter?

I am really enjoying this story, it is well written and shows good depth in getting to know the main characters. More of the same please, and wishing you continued success with your writing!

This was great. You continue to impress me with every chapter you write. I cant wait for the next chapter, its getting sooo good.

as the last time. I really like your storyline and your characters but the chapters are too short. As soon as you get really into the story, it stops. Your chapters are like a taste of a good meal when you're starving... they leave you wanting more but it's almost not worth the dissatisfaction you feel when you realize you have to wait. Personally, I wouldn't mind having a longer wait between chapters if they were a bit longer and meatier. Just an opinion... :)

I'm not usually into "non-human," however, you've done a wonderful job and I'm hooked. Keep 'em coming - I'm dying to read more of Red vs Wolfe's romance!

more please!

Really great story...I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon :)

I love werewolf stories and this one is very good. I know you are setting the scene up but how about a little more background on Red and Wolfe? Wolfmann

Comeee onnnn where is the rest of this story things are getting intense... I am ready for more pleaseeee more soon

I love this story, but would love it more if it was longer.Just start getting into it & its finished.Keep up the great writing

More would be wonderful!!

You need an editor honey. You have a great story going but there are a lot of mistakes in your grammar, as well as missing words from your sentences. an editor will help you fix this and maybe flesh out the story a little more. Keep writing.