All Comments on 'Redemption'

I truly wish everyone could have a relationship like this. It would make the world a better place!!

I made no secret of my dislike of The Fifth. This story is excellent in all respects, including your ability with the emotional components of a D/S relationship. Good show!

I've got some tears in my eyes man... that was beautiful

This would be well received in the bdsm catagory, had you posted it there. I hope many cross readers from there find it.

What a truly beautiful story! Fantastic and special!

after long time with wonderful story

OneWhoAdore's greatest strength is the way you can't help but identify with his characters. They feel so real, they share our fear and weaknesses as well as sharing our loves and joys.

This is especially true with Redemption. We all knew, right from the start, where the story was heading but it was a privilege to share the journey as two damaged souls found love, the greatest gift of all.

Bravo

yours stories are truly romantic and wonderful. i hope you write more often. i usually keep on searching four your new story, please write more stories.

Good premise.

But the sex it simply mechanical. No preliminaries. No foreplay. No real body part involvement except his tongue and her pussy. No touching him or his cock and balls. No discussion between them about what he/she liked and how he/she liked it.

Disappointing.

Three stars.

The characters are beautifully described and built in a way I can invest in them. The descriptive narrative and engaging dialogue immersed in romance and love is excellent. Thank you for a fantastic story.

It was perfection. The willing of a submissive to give themselves to their Dominate partner to take use as they please is the perfect fit of trust that will lead to love ❤

Beautiful.

Standing ovation! Bravo!

— Me