by Fuzzypen
totally unrealistic and hardly erotic. The "Belles of St. Trinians" was much more sexy than this rubbish. (Perhaps not many of this audience would know who they were.)
I just absolutely love this series. Keep going. Please don't stop. Don't ever fucking stop
I think he's doing a fine job with this and look forward to the whole thing as it goes along... BUT if you feel you can do better, then get your ass in gear and write something and put a fucking name to it instead of bitchin' from behind the "ANON" wall...
Kinky punishment should experience. bondage, spanking, full fisting, bandaged eyes, clips on nipples, many more ideas occur to me };->
I hate the last chapter cause of all the anal parts of it not a big fan of that. I like how you got on with the incest in this again but to have the older all of a sudden become submissive to her little sister also not a huge fan I like the youngest to the submissive.
The thing that always puzzled me about this story is both girls are grown one in her 20's and the other is 19 so why are they still in high school