All Comments on 'Reluctant Party Favor'

a husband who isn't a complete and utter asshole

more stories like this please and less of the disgusting genre

The ending certainly made up for his lack of ability to stop them.

Rape isn't sexy!!

The scenario was set up poorly...this one did this and that one did that one right after the other. Poor writing.You had a wonderful idea for a story and induced a childbook storyline to an adult theme. If the FBI was in fact involved in something like this the wrong would not have left it all go that far and Walter would not have fondled her bosom....Next time do research on your idea and take time to set it up with believable circumstances. Keep writing though, you had a very good Idea for a story.

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate the feedback. I don't write rape stories. The woman in this story was not raped. She chose her fate over a jail sentence, her choice. She could have changed her mind at any time. To the reader who wants me to improve my writing: I want to do that too. Can you suggest a reluctant sex story on this site that you consider good writing or excellent writing. That would help me. Another anonymous comment here would do the trick.Thank you.

You did alright night owl, the writing was actually better than a lot I've seen on this site. Advice: You shouldn't be afraid to dig down into the details abut how sweet little Aimee was abused, how many times she came because of it, how thick the cocks were, getting her anal cherry taken by the judge, yada yada yada.

Don't listen to these sanctimonious fucks, what are they doing reading porn lit in the non-consent/reluctance section if they don't like this stuff? Fuck 'em! I didn't sign in, but my pen name here is StephenWolfe60. You might like my stories. Keep writing, you'll get better!

Not enough detail

No One Fucked Her Ass??? 1st Hole I Hit with a Submissive...Not A Realistic Scenario...

The first part was good. It was very detailed. But the second you skipped the action. Please rewrite the story.