by DerekCartman
By far my favorite series on here right now. I hope you continue!
None of the chicks want it really and they're drugged. Yuck.
Why would you bother pretending the main guy has morals? It was a waste of words to get the main guy to talk about how illegal rape is, its not like he was against it or he'd have stopped it, but getting him to boringly talk about it being illegal took away from the story since he was this weird character trying seem good, but that's not what a story like this is about
I agree with LJJL, whats with the main character being super judgmental and pretending to being a decent human being and then not doing anything except being a coward voyeur? Apart from that, this story definitely has potential for sequels.
Please come back and write more about the escapades of Melissa! This is top quality! Absolute top!