by kandie
A sweet story of holiday spirit and miracles that can happen to the most unbelieving people.
I liked your story and it flowed very well. The horrible rape by her father is the one piece that brings me pain and hope she can really mend from be brutalized.<P>You have a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes but who cares get an editor if you please but it is not a big deal. Thank you for the entertainment and helping to put me into the Christmas mood of joy and giving, which is what it brings to me.<P>PT
I have an editor, unfortunately his computer is down and I haven't found a back-up on.....yet. I'm looking though as every writer should have an editor. Merry Christmas and Happy New Years to all. Kandie
I loved it! It made me realize that there is magic in the air at Xmas time. Keep up the good work doll. Hubby!