All Comments on 'Remembering'

Such a sweet story yet I fear a little exagerated at times . Most people enjoy stories they can relate to rather than the highly unusual .

will someone please masturbate that guy before he dies.

You didn't indicate this is part 1 but I hope you will continue the saga so there's finally some type of incest along the line.

Great story I love it thanks

If the goal was describing a "Creepy Guy", you nailed it.

Short and to the point. I loved it!

Why stop there? It's been 6 years since you wrote this and no chapter two. It was a great start. It's not like you to not have a tidy ending. You are still writing, so please continue.