Remind Me

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decoy88
decoy88
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Suddenly there was a load scraping sound from the front of the elevator.

"Hello in there?" It sounded like the person they had spoken to through the emergency line.

Kyle quickly set his sister down on the floor and she fanned her face trying to get rid of the blush she knew was there.

"Yes." Kyle replied. In that crazy moment, it was the only thing he could think to say. "We're here."

"Are you alright?" the voice said.

Kyle looked at his sister and saw a cheeky smirk on her face.

"Yeah," he replied, "we're fine."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I could tell you are a talented writer but this was too rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great Start

I agree with the other comments. Please keep going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This story started out great! i just wonder why it ended so quickly.please keep writing and try to submit more next time! I want to see more of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Fantastic first chapter. The buildup and development and tension were great. Please continue with more chapters. Potential to have an epic life long love story between Pam and Kyle. Ahhh everlasting life long love.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
A nice introduction

will the story be posted soon?

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