All Comments on 'Remind Me'

by decoy88

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Is that it....

...where's the story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
is that it....

Where's the hot sex....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Omg I love it ^.^ <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Betcha that elevator stunk to high heaven by the time the guy got there to rescue them. lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great start

It is a really good start, you should keep going

ChasBChasBabout 9 years ago

Are you going to finish this?

dadarknightdadarknightabout 9 years ago
Great Star, Keep it Going

Wonderful start, beautiful set up and already feel the characters' relationship. Please keep it going.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
A nice introduction

will the story be posted soon?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Fantastic first chapter. The buildup and development and tension were great. Please continue with more chapters. Potential to have an epic life long love story between Pam and Kyle. Ahhh everlasting life long love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This story started out great! i just wonder why it ended so quickly.please keep writing and try to submit more next time! I want to see more of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great Start

I agree with the other comments. Please keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I could tell you are a talented writer but this was too rushed.

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