All Comments on 'Renovation'

I liked it very much, but I do wish the ending had of been different, but after thinking about it I don't think I could of improved it. Anyway I myself think you did an excellent story. Thanks- Carroll

A real nice start, good flow and hot, thanks keep it up

Ollie

This would be a great start to a series, and I for one would love to see it continue. :)

Hurry with a follow up!

Yes, this story needs a continued affair with the father-in-law. Great, I hope that you write many more.

Hard to believe this is your first effort. Please keep writing! One minor point: The past tense of "grind" is "ground" (not "grinded").

should've been in 'loving wives' category..thats where the cheating stories go..it was a decent effort..i would score better but cheating stories get under my skin

with a delightful twist at the end. I think you've set the stage for a wonderful follow up..that could lead to many possibilities. Nicely done.

This young lady writes with feelings depicting scenarios of real life incidents and portraying human frailties and emotions that are unusual from an inexperienced teenager. This are the type and form of stories and formats that should be encourage.

Very HOT! We teally enjoyed it. Want to read more in perhaps a follow up.

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and you captured the whole guilty pleasure feeling very well. It could easily go to a sequel or two. As has been pointed out, you could have placed it in more than one category, but thankfully you didn't choose Loving Wives. Look forward to reading more submissions from you.

Delia ......... you are dirty and I am loving it!! Nice HOTTTT story.

Can we have a follow up one now?

???who the fuck is talking at what time in the story?!

Wonderfully-told illicit tale with shifting, conflicting emotions. Keep this up and you'll soon be a Literotica great! Thank you.

Fuck babygirl, you are so fucking hot!!! Can't wait to read some more.

POV Changes from hell.. badly done, takes paragraphs to figure out you've switched, and to which character. This is what 3rd person is all about. Really awful.