All Comments on 'Rest of the Week'

I guess I am morally obligated to award FIVE stars! SINCE (correct spelling for this usage, SENSE is what LP1957 should have chosen early on!) there seem to be some scheduling problems as well, that commitment hurts a little! However, the erotica is VERY well portrayed! Excellent use of dialogue, especially Sweetie's teasing! Her future seems to hurdle from diligently-faithful-to-vows to 'strange DP' before returning to Possum Springs!

(Good choice about keeping your day job! Writing erotica for a volunteer site as a main occupation is probably a wonderful way to lose weight - quickly!)

PS - Love how you turned the lemons of a name-goof into limeade! (sic)

Well done, looking forward to the next installment.

I have a very good reason for disliking stories of infidelity, none of which make me a goon or illiterate. You and your supporting commenters would do well to just put a sock in it. Let your writing stand on its merits. In fact, I would like to see you write a Romance story about real people.

Jon,

If you don't like infidelity stories, why not just avoid reading them? I don't like rape stories or incest stories, so despite the volume of them on this site I don't read them.

another small-dicked cock-loving redneck cuck.

Hate unfinished stories. I won't read anymore cause you never know if they will be finished?

he wanted answers.....he got answers,,,,,just not what he expected, TK U MLJ LV NV

Your final paragraph finished a poorly written story on a high note. If not liking drivel like this makes me a hater, then I'll own the title. As for not being a writer, posting a dozen pieces of shit like this doesn't make you a writer either.