All Comments on 'Reunion'

Loved reading another of your great stories. I can't wait until your next one comes out.

Another great story, however it did seem to be slightly rushed covering the back story and then bringing it to a conclusion, that is only my personal opinion I am sure there are others who will disagree, having said that it didn't distract from the piece as a whole

Thank you

Seemed like an advert for legalizing incest more than a story

The ending was stupid was good tell you added the brother then just ruined it.

i like all you stories - they are also well written, and have a plot, but i agree with the comment this one seemed like a rushed ending. did something happen between Karen and her father, for example? If you continued it, or developed it further, could Karen and Tom be married but andy would allow visits from Sarah, remaining out of his sister's relationship? anyway, just a few thoughts.

you must have lost the 5 page draft for this tale so you whipped something up in 45 min. at least thats the way it looks to me..wam bam and its over,,everyone fell in love overnight and in a few paragraphs all is decided. all i know is what i see,, cant read minds but cannot imagine why you would make this a stroke story instead of the lovely family tale it should have been,,,well written and all. just sayin'

Lame is the best way to describe this story. AAA++

Damn, I was reading it, in the hope of getting a big group hug....

A part 2 could fix that problem of course....

Less than 24hrs, or overnight, and Karen and Sarah were having sex and the father joined! Totally too fucking quick!!

Then Andy gets in!!

TRAILER PARK TRASH