by griffin57
This was a sweet quickie of a story! It should have been a little longer, but it was good!
a very sweet story,only quibble is it is likely is samantha was taking hormones and blockers for 10 years she wouldn't really be able to get erect and she wouldn't have any "sweet cream"...seriously a sweet story!
Thank you for this, it was well written and for being short had very well developed characters. Fantastic and I hope to see more from you.
nicely written too-thanks
...The time, I had to start a whole 'nother box of tissues... sometimes its just plain tough reading these stories, but I wouldn't trade the feeling for anything. Thank you for another tear filled, and lovely evening of reading wonderful prose, can't wait for lots more ;-)
Once again you prove your art to be well constructed, artfully decorated, and craftily understated, which, to me gave the characters realistic depth.
I love the feel of wet eyes from the human warmth within your tails --- tales. Thank you.
Griffin, you have penned a beautiful story for which I congratulate you. Thank you so very much for this heart warming story of human acceptance.
Two minor issues though. Protocols do not call for water to be poured onto a car in the possible event of a fire. The water would have spread out the petroleum products such as the oils, transmission fluid and especially the gasoline. This would have caused the potentiality of the car fire to increase exponentially. Also, any medic such as the Hero would know the proper way to stabilize a patient after an automobile accident. This is even more important when it is a vehicle flipped over with entrapment.
This was a wonderful and sweet story. Yeah, Brad is still a jerk.
I would love to read more stories like this..... hell, I'd give anything to live a story like this.
I really liked it,i like happy endings ,thank you for writing the story.
I enjoyed the story for the most part, though it did feel a bit rushed. The ending completely threw me though. I'm expecting a nice little HEA wrap up and instead there is this weird scene based around an incredibly unbelievable coincidence. Which you felt the need to make even more unbelievable by saying he rescued someone else at the same spot(who were themselves rescuing someone....seriously?). Why? I mean, why pile on to an already silly bit of plot development that really served no purpose in the first place? Also why build up this romance only to have it end with the return of a character I couldn't care less about? Oh, a trans saved him and his wife's life so now he's suddenly tolerant of them? Yeah, cause that's the kind of guy you want to have over for dinner.
Good setup, okay follow through, but just an outright terrible ending.
I'm just a hopeless romantic, but I love the sweet story of love and acceptance.