All Comments on 'Reunited Pt. 01'

If you are seriously contemplating doing any more writing then get yourself someone to edit your stories into something more readable!!

What made it so difficult to read? I need to know so I can either improve or know what kind of editor I need to look for.

I had no problem reading it and thoroughly enjoyed it. Five stars. Looking forward to more. If I saw a problem, I would point it out, but do so constructively and without the vitriol we often see.