All Comments on 'Reunited Pt. 01'

I had no problem reading it and thoroughly enjoyed it. Five stars. Looking forward to more. If I saw a problem, I would point it out, but do so constructively and without the vitriol we often see.

What made it so difficult to read? I need to know so I can either improve or know what kind of editor I need to look for.

If you are seriously contemplating doing any more writing then get yourself someone to edit your stories into something more readable!!