All Comments on 'Revenge'

Decent story but it moved too quickly and had little build-up. The story could have been a hundred times better if these characters were developed even more. Why does this girl like to spread rumors or why would this guy want to make DVDs for revenge? Still a decent story.

This was supposed to be erotic? Maybe so, if one's tastes run to mediocre stroke stories with the infliction of pain making up for sexual inadequacies

That's what I'm talking about. Show the bitch what for.

Fuck the details, it does the job. What happens to her when people find out, would be good to know too.

The best way to show that he was clean was for the tape to show him fucking her barback and climax inside her pussy. People with Aids can still have sex if they use condoms and don't swallow each others body fluids. (Heck it would have served the bitch right if he knocker her up too)

You can always write another chapter...

So she's a slut and he's a male whore. What's the difference? In addition she's a slanderous gossip(he thinks) and he is a vicious slanderer who enjoys humiliating women. Is there anyone to root for in this story? Not erotic at all. 60 year old George

We need the aftermath!