All Comments on 'Revenge'

by steele1701

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charleybearcharleybearover 18 years ago
Needed one final sentence.

As he walks out the door he hears his wife whisper, "Thanks John (or whatever his name is), I really needed that."

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
it was good..

he should have knocked her up.

Happy TrailsHappy Trailsover 18 years ago
sorry

it wasn't too bad but give me a break, you couldn't give the woman a little back bone. If she was so high on the bible then she'd have fought or begged, pleaded, something. You made her into a doormat and that's pitiful.

spiderman1spiderman1about 17 years ago
needed a finish

The story need something more at the end.

gfrhgfrhover 4 years ago
Bad

Sorry, but it's not revenge if the other person enjoys it. 1 star

Helen1899Helen18997 months ago

it was only missing, a good beginning, a good middle and a good ending

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